
Painting She somewhat grins with master strokes - Curved lines carved roads winding over each other in search for ways to express the moment when she twinkled. Her portrait is a lesson in geography, mapped texture symphony, different shades imposing on each other - harmony in gradients and contrast. Run your fingers up her coarse hair and ripe-less nose, a hand's etchings into canvas, the steady story where copper hills meet an oily river of tan and burgundy: Paths groove through a valley - wrinkles on soft tundra, lace in the hot Latvian loom, sticky leather skin ripples, weaving through childish screams, tugging wars, forgotten dreams and wet bed sores. Behind a hidden tree they met, out in open twilight an autumn day they spent, basking, one in the other's eye, in-tent. Unfed I numbingly clutched her face in infant rage, and shrieked boisterously. On roads she led me by my hand. Her grainy fingers, I remember - Hold my hand. Good boy. in her thick tongue - as we brushed through bland third-world traffic. Once upon a time a satellite heard us canvass why we hardly conversed. Over phone-static blotches we ended with the somewhat usual uttered formal words and kisses. I miss you. Me too. Some paintings must be put under glass for preservation. Else they crack and fade under the touch of cheek. |
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