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Mad Scientist

Minds'
abstract concepts
are likened to circles
linked by straight lines.

The world outside a mind,
where information travels,
consists of lined squares.

Dwelling between the two,
in the sphere of semantics
he can be seen running.
Flurry.

Flowing conflagration,
surroundings leak
information
to be captured
in furious mumbles -
digits neurotically
joining dots in the air
by this swaggering lunatic.

In his abode
a cavernous
collection of relics
archaically dust-stamped
awaits.
Scores of dimmed adventures
into time and space.

He ventures for pen
and paper, mentally
scribbling
his next hypothesis -
a sure epic

beginning with riddle,
conjuring plots,
relating character
variables.
Formulating quasi-
cliché punch lines.
Drawing up the plans
for his next addition
to an unfinished
life.

 
I can't believe it but I have another poem up for posting (considering how busy I am right now). This one has sort of been sitting on the shelf. I have been working on it little by little for a while and think it has reached its end in my own "work shop" and is now ready for crit &/or praise.

The title is as indifferent as the category it falls into. Sorry guys. All my poems are emotional and I like to consider them somewhat philosophical. Also, most of them don't fall into any one category.

Please feel free to tear this piece apart if possible.

Revision
23 March 2004 - 1. Altered stanza 5 to exclude mention of Pinocchio. 2. Last stanza -Added "variables"
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It's beautiful!